Today, Mrs. Han returned our "women in combat" essays back. I think not many students got a good grade on this essay ( including me). Most students felt bad about their essays grade. Otherwise these bad grade lets us know that we have to study harder to improve our writing skills.
In exercise 6-7 on page 116, i chose 2 thesis statements #1 & #7
#1: Thesis statement: Learning English isn't so easy
a. I have to follow many different rules in English grammar.
b. I have to practise listening and reading in English frequently.
c. I have to learn and write many new words correctly.
#7: thesis statement : People go to shopping centers for many reasons.
a. They want to relax after a whole week is busy
b. They return something which they don't like. c. They go to their favorite stores such as Macy's, Tommy, Gucci.
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